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| kazeminarocloud |
 Jan 20 2006, 15:54
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My blood was once red and
now is black. There is something I lost that will not come back . my wind is dying and no one is crying........so I feel nothing. The clouds will not part my world is crumbling. I cannot here the rumbling my light is gone and Im so alone nothing can compare to the shadow that covers my world the eternity of my life is ending soon sorry I cannot see the face of the moon..... -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| AnGeL_LoVe |
Jan 20 2006, 20:37
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 Tennou Group: Chuunin Posts: 1548 Joined: 30-September 05 From: HeAvEn |
yay first comment
  ... another beautiful poem^^-------------------- De-ar fi sa-ti impartesti odata Tu bogatiile ce ai, Din toate darurile tale, Ti-as cere-o lacrima sa-mi dai. Mi-ai da atunci un strop de suflet, ce din adancuri imi rasare, Caci numai din adancul marii Se pescuiesc margaritare... |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 20 2006, 21:14
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QUOTE(AnGeL_LoVe @ Jan 20 2006, 21:37) yay first comment ... another beautiful poem^^ *sigh* angel a true friend and fan!!!! -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| rebel |
Jan 21 2006, 00:56
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 Shishaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 447 Joined: 7-February 05 From: artifical life |
if only there weren't so many misspelled words, i'd say that the poem's quite ok.
-------------------- it's never too late to start wasting your life...
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| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 22 2006, 06:41
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QUOTE(rebel @ Jan 21 2006, 01:56) if only there weren't so many misspelled words, i'd say that the poem's quite ok. Better? I modified it so there arn't any now...........  -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| Kima_Rose |
 Feb 2 2006, 05:16
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Your poetry is very good...It has a kind of darkness to it.....I like it...
Would it be okay if I added some of my poetry? Well.... See Ya!! (^ _ ^) -------------------- "The sadness of the moon is reflected in your eyes.... I see it there every day."---Kima_Rose
"The heartlessness of the moon reflects in your soul."---Kima_Rose I am also a member of these forums: Inuyasha Journey Latvian Otaku Forum The Anime Island Anime Paradise Anime Resort Anime Life |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 4 2006, 08:19
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QUOTE(Kima_Rose @ Feb 2 2006, 06:16) Your poetry is very good...It has a kind of darkness to it.....I like it... Would it be okay if I added some of my poetry? Well.... See Ya!! (^ _ ^) sure go ahead -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| redphoeinx |
Feb 10 2006, 20:24
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 Heimin Group: Chuunin Posts: 24 Joined: 20-November 05 From: uk |
ive got a poem but its not finished can i put it on here wheb it is plz
love that poem it moved me dont no how but it did  -------------------- |
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| Rika |
Feb 14 2006, 17:36
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 Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 268 Joined: 6-November 05 From: I am un-locatable |
Poem is super,I like it!!!!!I hope you will make another poem in the future!)))))))))))
-------------------- даже добро делал всем на зло
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