 new poem, how i truly feel |
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| kazeminarocloud |
 Jan 19 2006, 21:42
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 Samurai  Group: Banned Posts: 134 Joined: 26-October 05 From: Sonoke castle  |
Sorrowful angel
Maybe its the dark that continues to try to seep into light that has dwindled into nothingness Maybe its the crying flower of hopelessness .maybe its my heart which is constantly changing shades or maybe just maybe its me. My face says Im happy while my heart says otherwise this feeling is the feeling of sorrowful angels of me that Cry . Why am I tortured by myself and people adding or trying anyways do nothing to help .. Please help for I know much but not the answer to myself .. These are thoughts of a sage that is covered by darkness Nothing can be worth living for this . -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| Tigra2 |
Jan 19 2006, 22:24
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 kawaii tora Group: Chuunin Posts: 2359 Joined: 19-August 05 |
Beautiful. You have varied vocab
 . This poem is filled with sadness and deep questions, that has no ansver. Big respect, I rad it with pleasure. I will wait your next work. -------------------- |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 19 2006, 22:29
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Samurai Group: Banned Posts: 134 Joined: 26-October 05 From: Sonoke castle |
QUOTE(Tigra2 @ Jan 19 2006, 23:24) Beautiful. You have varied vocab . This poem is filled with sadness and deep questions, that has no ansver. Big respect, I rad it with pleasure. I will wait your next work.  thanks  -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| AnGeL_LoVe |
Jan 20 2006, 02:57
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 Tennou Group: Chuunin Posts: 1548 Joined: 30-September 05 From: HeAvEn |
oh so cool... ladies and gentelmen we have one big artist here ^^.
-------------------- De-ar fi sa-ti impartesti odata Tu bogatiile ce ai, Din toate darurile tale, Ti-as cere-o lacrima sa-mi dai. Mi-ai da atunci un strop de suflet, ce din adancuri imi rasare, Caci numai din adancul marii Se pescuiesc margaritare... |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 20 2006, 15:48
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Samurai Group: Banned Posts: 134 Joined: 26-October 05 From: Sonoke castle |
QUOTE(AnGeL_LoVe @ Jan 20 2006, 03:57) oh so cool... ladies and gentelmen we have one big artist here ^^. thanks Ill put one more today -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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