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Tomoko
post Sep 15 2005, 18:12
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Mees bijaam laimiigi.
Mees smeejaamies,
Mees smaidiijaam...
Tad tas notika..
Tu biji satriekts.
Tu vairs neredzeeji ko dari.
Neviens tevi nesaprata.
Neviens, iznjemot mani.
Es centos no visiem speekiem tev palidzeet,
Bet tu mani nedzirdeeji.
Es gaidiiju briinumu, un tu arii..
Tas nepienaaca.
Un tu veel joprojaam nesmaidiiji.
Visus apmekleeja briinums, tevi nee.
Tu juties neiezprasts.
Taapat kaa es..
agraak..
Tu vairs nesmaidi.
Vairs nekad..
Tu centies izdzivot starp shiim ledus sienaam,
kas tevi ieskaava,
spieda, pazemoja un tevi izniicinaaja
Tu biji viens, tu centies aizsargaaties
Tas nesanaaca,
Tu sabruki....


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Rudoru-san
post Sep 15 2005, 18:16
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He, es laikam esmu pirmais šī darbiņa lasītājs! Jāsaka, ka ļoti interesanti & saistoši! Uzreiz liek iedomāties par kādu Anime... Patiešām labi, liekas, ka Tu par kādu konkrētu personu raxti... laugh.gif


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Sushi
post Sep 15 2005, 18:21
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Baigi labi Tomoko!!! biggrin.gif Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling... smile.gif Taa tik tureet! biggrin.gif


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Tomoko
post Sep 15 2005, 18:34
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QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:21)
Baigi labi Tomoko!!! biggrin.gif Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling... smile.gif Taa tik tureet! biggrin.gif
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Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu, ka ledus sienas bija dziesmaa Crawling! rolleyes.gif Un, ja ta godiigi, tas ir mans maajasdarbs literatuuraa, uzraxtiit un noformeet dzejoli, un kautkaa gribeejaas kautko origjinaalu un savu smile.gif!
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post Sep 15 2005, 18:35
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Biagi labi...un tieshaam atgaadina animi......tik izteikti un izjusti.....nu zini veel kaadu, veel kaadu!!!! biggrin.gif laugh.gif


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post Sep 15 2005, 18:40
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QUOTE(Tomoko @ Sep 15 2005, 19:34)
QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:21)
Baigi labi Tomoko!!! biggrin.gif Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling... smile.gif Taa tik tureet! biggrin.gif
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Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu, ka ledus sienas bija dziesmaa Crawling! rolleyes.gif Un, ja ta godiigi, tas ir mans maajasdarbs literatuuraa, uzraxtiit un noformeet dzejoli, un kautkaa gribeejaas kautko origjinaalu un savu smile.gif!
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Nu ja! biggrin.gif Tikai tur bija iisteniibaa kristaala sienas. Vismaz taa es lasiiju k-kur internetaa! rolleyes.gif


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Tomoko
post Sep 15 2005, 18:46
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QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:40)
QUOTE(Tomoko @ Sep 15 2005, 19:34)
QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:21)
Baigi labi Tomoko!!! biggrin.gif Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling... smile.gif Taa tik tureet! biggrin.gif
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Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu, ka ledus sienas bija dziesmaa Crawling! rolleyes.gif Un, ja ta godiigi, tas ir mans maajasdarbs literatuuraa, uzraxtiit un noformeet dzejoli, un kautkaa gribeejaas kautko origjinaalu un savu smile.gif!
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Nu ja! biggrin.gif Tikai tur bija iisteniibaa kristaala sienas. Vismaz taa es lasiiju k-kur internetaa! rolleyes.gif
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Kristaala? Vai, sorry, bet es nezinaaju... Bet tad vismaz ir atshkjiriba starp klipu un manu dzejoli happy.gif smile.gif!
Man shodien iedvesma tongue.gif! Veel buus kautkas jaaparaksta }=) rolleyes.gif !
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post Sep 15 2005, 18:49
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Dereetu gan! wink.gif Tachu Crawling man ir miiljaakaa Linkin Park dziesma, kaut arii veca... smile.gif Bet turpini raxtiit! biggrin.gif


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Tomoko
post Sep 15 2005, 18:54
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QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:49)
Dereetu gan! wink.gif Tachu Crawling man ir miiljaakaa Linkin Park dziesma, kaut arii veca... smile.gif Bet turpini raxtiit! biggrin.gif
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Klausos, gjeneraal'! biggrin.gif Jaanoformee texc, un tad jau varees kjerties pie raxtiishanas smile.gif! (ja sanaaks laikas) wink.gif
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post Sep 15 2005, 19:12
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Truukst vaardu. Viss, ko es veelos teikt, izgaist pusceljaa. Taapeec es tikai klanos. Visu cienju.


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post Sep 15 2005, 20:03
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Closed??? A? huh.gif


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Tomoko
post Sep 16 2005, 16:41
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Ok, topick un-locked ^^!
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post Sep 16 2005, 17:07
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Ļoti labi uzrakstīts....man patīk... laugh.gif


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Neo: ...and you give me my phone call.
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Tomoko
post Sep 16 2005, 17:16
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Paldiess, paldiess! smile.gif
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post Sep 16 2005, 17:16
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Baigie primadonnas gājieni. Uzrakstam vienu dzejoli, sagaidam piecas atsauksmes. Bez paskaidrojumiem slēdzam topiku. Bez paskaidrojumiem atkal to atveram. WTF?

Bet dzejolis tik tiešām vairāk atgādina dziesmas liriku. Starp citu, kas tam čomam vainas? Bija ar vēzi vai alkoholismu sirgstošs?


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