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post Oct 20 2004, 12:38
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post Oct 24 2004, 20:59
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Her eyes were venom green, her hair black as the darkest night, yet her face, thin though it might be, was beautiful. Her beauty enchanting and evil would consume me had Aisha not been here. She jumped at the “goddess” and wrestled her down, Xaa in turn just threw her off and against the wall and immediately turned all of her attention to me completely ignoring Aisha who seemingly crumpled by the wall. A very big mistake might I add; Aisha was already rising, her eyes glowed red, her every muscle was strained. I needed to draw Xaa’s attention so she wouldn’t notice Aisha’s transformation. I concentrated and a phantom blade formed itself around my arm. Xaa snickered softly “I see you indeed remember something. But how can you single-handedly stand against me??” After saying this, she flung herself at me at tremendous speed. I was paralyzed with fear, although my body thought otherwise. I felt myself pivot on my right leg, narrowly avoiding her claw-like fingers and perform a superb slash with my newly formed blade. The slash went wide, because she was not there anymore. I somehow felt her behind my back and without hesitation leapt back and landed neatly about three feet away, but something was wrong. The ground seemed like ice and I felt myself sliding further. While I was contemplating my new environment, my blade acted deftly on its own, impaling itself into the ground and bringing me to a halt.
Xaa seemed to be taken aback, although no doubt entered her voice as she coolly commented on my acrobatic feats “’Tis but a trifle of my power, but already you are driven into defense.” Without answering, I composed myself and cast a quick glance towards Aisha. Unfortunately, she still needed time. This time I would need to attack, lest Xaa noticed her yet unrevealed foe. I tugged my blade a bit and felt that it cut smoothly trough the floor’s matter. I couldn’t hope to strike her down, so my only choice was to use her ignorance of my powers and Aisha. I charged towards Xaa, my blade still sheeted in the ground, cutting trough the floor behind me, peculiarly making no sound. About two feet away from Xaa I leapt desperately into the air, forming seals with my hands. After gaining about ten feet of altitude, they were complete and I began my descent, accompanied by my chants. I saw Xaa eyes widen in shock, as she witnessed thirty blades that seemed to be emitting a dark glow clashing down on her. Xaa swiftly phased away evading my desperate attempt to strike her down. Yet another surprise awaited our hostess. Aisha, having completed her transformation, was ready for a warm welcome. She lashed out at Xaa’s back, bringing her down to her knees.
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Tador   Fan fiction   Oct 20 2004, 12:38
Tador   Ja kas, <<Mah Work's beginning>> i...   Oct 20 2004, 16:29
Delicatty   Labais gabals, kad buus turpinaajums??? Gribas vee...   Oct 20 2004, 16:29
Tador   pattiko saaku rakstiit, shobriid kaa jau saku esmu...   Oct 20 2004, 16:32
Kikumi   O-hei! Un man likās, ka esmu vienīgā, kas raks...   Oct 24 2004, 19:00
Tador   interesanti...   Oct 24 2004, 19:08
Kikumi   Gribi palasīt? Ja saproti vācu valodu, tad uz prie...   Oct 24 2004, 19:57
Tador   MOO!!! doushite doitsu go   Oct 24 2004, 20:14
Kikumi   Ahem, vai latviski varētu? :blink:   Oct 24 2004, 20:18
Tador   kapeec vaacu valodaa?... Ehh, ko lai padara... A ...   Oct 24 2004, 20:22
Kikumi   Āa! Rakstu priekš vācu portāla Animexx. :) A, ...   Oct 24 2004, 20:32
Tador   pirmaa nodalja. links ir augshaa   Oct 24 2004, 20:34
Kikumi   Aha, tagad daleca! :)   Oct 24 2004, 20:39
Tador   Her eyes were venom green, her hair black as the d...   Oct 24 2004, 20:59
Kikumi   I envy your fantasy, Tador! Such a wonderful s...   Oct 24 2004, 21:02
Tador   envy... such a delichious word... well, i have no...   Oct 24 2004, 21:26
ShinChan   Nezinu, nezinu. Šādu sacerējumu lasīšanu es uzskat...   Oct 24 2004, 21:48
Taka   Kāds laikam Naruto pārskatījies... :blink:   Oct 24 2004, 21:56
Tador   vispaar "Kage bunshin" jau pirms naruto...   Oct 24 2004, 22:30
Kami-sama   Super :))   Oct 25 2004, 09:04
Kikumi   Wow, 26 nodaļas! Traks var palikt! :blink:...   Oct 25 2004, 10:06
Seto   jopchik popchik - tauta galiigi aptrakusi- kur var...   Oct 28 2004, 03:02
Kikumi   Pamēģini kādreiz pats! Attīsta domāšanu! ;...   Oct 28 2004, 16:37
Shinobi-sama   Mmm.. teiskim, baigi vienkaarsha valoda, bet trinn...   Oct 29 2004, 11:20
aivvv   skatos jums te maz cilveeku kas ar ssito nnemaas v...   Nov 15 2004, 05:46
Zaxion   Nju vai ziniet, baigi labi tikai viens mazs jautaa...   Nov 26 2004, 00:26
DarkRockslizer   Kāpēc tu domā, ka visi te raxta tikai fanfics? ...   Dec 16 2004, 19:59
aivvv   katarase terase man pie galda staav smirdiiga teej...   Feb 4 2005, 06:48
Kikumi   Neesi kādreiz mēģinājis repot? :huh: Pats pantiņš ...   Feb 4 2005, 22:57
aivvv   man labaak protams patiik stepot bet ir naacies a...   Feb 5 2005, 06:44
dmonster   Kikumi, ja tu raksti Animexx (forsh saits) kāds i...   Feb 17 2005, 15:57
aivvv   seezzu darbaa konservi tarbaa kompis uz galda ko ...   Jun 25 2005, 21:06
Kikumi   Kikumi, ja tu raksti Animexx (forsh saits) kāds i...   Jun 28 2005, 12:47
Janus   Galvenais ka neko nesalaiz griste ja veido fan fic...   Jul 2 2005, 12:21
Tsukino   Kikumi, tad tu kaut ko ieliksi? Vienalga ka deutsh...   Jul 3 2005, 13:38
EndlessReality   Es arī rakstu. Vai kāds lūdzu būs tik laipns un pa...   Aug 29 2005, 20:32
Tador   Laaps, skatoties kaa te viss notiekaas... ielikshu...   Aug 31 2005, 03:51
Tador   te otraa Part Two: Agnosco te ipsum. “I am gl...   Aug 31 2005, 03:53
Tador   ak, jaa... aizmirsu tradicionaalo luugumu atkaarto...   Aug 31 2005, 22:06
EndlessReality   0_o Daudz gan... Sorry, man pietrūkst pacietības t...   Sep 1 2005, 17:28
Tador   aww, come on! tikai kaadi 6500 vaard :(   Sep 2 2005, 04:11
ReD_FoXy   Arii man nav pacietiibas lasiit... mosh ja buutu l...   Sep 2 2005, 17:29
pinksakura   man patīk fantastiski....nēsu pilnīgi visu izlasīj...   Sep 2 2005, 21:26
rebel   nju,ir ok. incanti,tik darbiiba taa paleenaam atti...   Sep 2 2005, 22:23
Tador   Paleenaam??? urm, tas nav iisdarbs - man pusliidz...   Sep 3 2005, 00:09
Shaisuke   SANJEEMOS!!!!!!!! ...   Sep 3 2005, 01:23
rebel   nju,ja 52 chapteri,tad ok. jo citrejz ir taa,ka ra...   Sep 3 2005, 11:27
Tador   heh, bet briidinu... vienaa vietaa esmu jau kuro m...   Sep 3 2005, 19:57
Sushi   Izskataas interesanti! Tad, kad man buus sakra...   Sep 3 2005, 20:11
ReD_FoXy   Missy - tikai tu un vieniigi tu esi vainiiga... Es...   Sep 3 2005, 23:21
Sushi   Zini, ReD_FoXy, es tev iesaku lietot iipashos li...   Sep 4 2005, 00:29


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