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| kazeminarocloud |
 Jan 20 2006, 15:54
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 Samurai  Group: Banned Posts: 134 Joined: 26-October 05 From: Sonoke castle  |
My blood was once red and
now is black. There is something I lost that will not come back . my wind is dying and no one is crying........so I feel nothing. The clouds will not part my world is crumbling. I cannot here the rumbling my light is gone and Im so alone nothing can compare to the shadow that covers my world the eternity of my life is ending soon sorry I cannot see the face of the moon..... -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| redphoeinx |
Feb 10 2006, 20:24
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 Heimin Group: Chuunin Posts: 24 Joined: 20-November 05 From: uk |
ive got a poem but its not finished can i put it on here wheb it is plz
love that poem it moved me dont no how but it did  -------------------- |
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| Rika |
Feb 14 2006, 17:36
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 Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 268 Joined: 6-November 05 From: I am un-locatable |
Poem is super,I like it!!!!!I hope you will make another poem in the future!)))))))))))
-------------------- даже добро делал всем на зло
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kazeminarocloud darkness Jan 20 2006, 15:54
AnGeL_LoVe yay first comment :lol: :P ... another beautiful... Jan 20 2006, 20:37
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*sigh* angel a true friend and fan!!... Jan 20 2006, 21:14 rebel if only there weren't so many misspelled words... Jan 21 2006, 00:56 kazeminarocloud
Better? I modified it so there arn't any now... Jan 22 2006, 06:41 Kima_Rose Your poetry is very good...It has a kind of darkne... Feb 2 2006, 05:16 kazeminarocloud
sure go ahead :lol: :lol: :lol: Feb 4 2006, 08:19 |
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