| kazeminarocloud |
Nov 11 2005, 22:18
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Check this out
I am the unforgiven angel of the light holding pieces of broken anger never knowing when or why im going to die it's just why I have to fight.............Nothing will ever hold me back may it be mortial or immortial.............Here I go. The dark in nothing the only truly scary thing is my destiny. Fallen light endless night For the fight im immortial! Soring past the dark and Never loosing hope this one thing ...... Just one thing........!!! I am the loving demon of the dark holding pices of dying Ember and now my wings have broken but Im no hurt or scared this is somthing that was thought about for a while now I know theres no turning back!! Because I am the wind controling mortal in this fight the stars and the light are ever growing!!! Humph you couldnt beat me even if I wasnt immortial... -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| Kaede |
Nov 23 2005, 01:05
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![]() Koutaishi ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Chuunin Posts: 1221 Joined: 25-October 04 From: maybe in your dreams |
Beautifyll! I think, thats somethink so good!
I cant descirbe my feelings! They are so strong after I red the poem... Ah!!! -------------------- |
| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 11 2006, 22:32
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QUOTE(Angelic @ Nov 23 2005, 02:05) Beautifyll! I think, thats somethink so good! I cant descirbe my feelings! They are so strong after I red the poem... Ah!!! man did u people know that i couldnt find this poem on this site this must of been luck but thanks and ill try to finish it ur i mean try anyway -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 13 2006, 22:27
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would i get more replies if it were in latvian?
-------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
| redphoeinx |
Feb 13 2006, 00:13
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![]() Heimin ![]() Group: Chuunin Posts: 24 Joined: 20-November 05 From: uk |
QUOTE(kazeminarocloud @ Jan 13 2006, 19:27) hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replays why dont u try it -------------------- |
| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 13 2006, 18:04
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hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replays why dont u try it [/quote] it would take a long time because i cant read lativan its a completle diffrent language then the one i currently speak -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
| Rika |
Feb 14 2006, 17:39
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[quote=kazeminarocloud,Feb 13 2006, 17:04]
hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replays why dont u try it [/quote] it would take a long time because i cant read lativan its a completle diffrent language then the one i currently speak [/quote] That's ok!!!! You can write if you want,but I like the english way!))))) But whitch language do you speak?!?! -------------------- даже добро делал всем на зло
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| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 14 2006, 19:04
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That's ok!!!! You can write if you want,but I like the english way!))))) But whitch language do you speak?!?! [/quote] english and im studing japanese oh and i know a bit of hebrew -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
kazeminarocloud Poem Nov 11 2005, 22:18
AnGeL_LoVe :o great poem... :) Nov 11 2005, 22:26
redphoeinx
that is a great poem :D :blink: Nov 21 2005, 22:42
Tigra2 Interesting. I realy think you shold continue, bec... Nov 23 2005, 00:25
Tairanda Šī nots, šī aukstā nots.
Šī ledainā nots, aiz kura... Feb 14 2006, 18:14
kazeminarocloud XXXXXXXXX Feb 14 2006, 18:57
Tairanda you didn't understand. i thanslated my poem in... Feb 14 2006, 22:58
kazeminarocloud
oh...opps I thought it was mine because it was ab... Feb 15 2006, 17:11
Kikyou Hmm, it's somewhat okay. But I prefer poems wh... Feb 20 2006, 18:04
edg
Exactly! If you put only your best poems here... Feb 20 2006, 18:30
kahi whell, i red the poem, and i don't think that ... Feb 20 2006, 19:26
kazeminarocloud
well people have a free will so they can read wha... Feb 21 2006, 01:26
Angel, the deamon killer this is my poem
THE DARKNESS
I am stuck in plac... Mar 14 2006, 13:48
kazeminarocloud this is cool the things that i like most about poe... Mar 14 2006, 17:31
Lust To both : nice work Mar 15 2006, 21:17
kazeminarocloud
your just saying that noone else thinks that Mar 15 2006, 21:44
edg
your just saying that noone else thinks that
[sna... Mar 16 2006, 03:17
kazeminarocloud well............I guess your right because i write... Mar 16 2006, 19:02
kahi GEEZ, edg, aren't you tierd to write all this?... Mar 16 2006, 21:39
kazeminarocloud
thanks Mar 16 2006, 22:21
rebel edg - respect. the best thing in this topic was th... Apr 2 2006, 22:29![]() ![]() |
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