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| kazeminarocloud |
 Nov 11 2005, 22:18
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I am the unforgiven angel of the light holding pieces of broken anger never knowing when or why im going to die it's just why I have to fight.............Nothing will ever hold me back may it be mortial or immortial.............Here I go. The dark in nothing the only truly scary thing is my destiny. Fallen light endless night For the fight im immortial! Soring past the dark and Never loosing hope this one thing ...... Just one thing........!!! I am the loving demon of the dark holding pices of dying Ember and now my wings have broken but Im no hurt or scared this is somthing that was thought about for a while now I know theres no turning back!! Because I am the wind controling mortal in this fight the stars and the light are ever growing!!! Humph you couldnt beat me even if I wasnt immortial... -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 21 2006, 01:26
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QUOTE(Kikyou @ Feb 20 2006, 19:04) Hmm, it's somewhat okay. But I prefer poems which actually have rhymes. (Why, oh why can't you just die? o_O) Also, it would take you... dunno... Over 10 years?, to learn speaking latvian fluently. Doubt you'd get more comments if it was in latvian, anyway. Maybe you just post too many poems, so people are kinda tired of commenting and stuff. XD  well people have a free will so they can read what they waunt and as far as me learning latvian it was just a joke i probably wount try to start on that till after i learn japanese QUOTE(edg @ Feb 20 2006, 19:30) QUOTE(Kikyou @ Feb 20 2006, 17:04) Maybe you just post too many poems, so people are kinda tired of commenting and stuff. XD Exactly! If you put only your best poems here, they'd get much more attention. Otherwise the best stuff just gets sunk among the average stuff. well most of it is done wile im at the com but just as ive said B4 people are intitled to there own opinion so i really don't get discouraged that easily by things such as this  -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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kazeminarocloud Poem Nov 11 2005, 22:18
AnGeL_LoVe :o great poem... :) Nov 11 2005, 22:26 redphoeinx
that is a great poem :D :blink: Nov 21 2005, 22:42 Tigra2 Interesting. I realy think you shold continue, bec... Nov 23 2005, 00:25 Natsuki Beautifyll! I think, thats somethink so good... Nov 23 2005, 01:05
kazeminarocloud
man did u people know that i couldnt find this po... Jan 11 2006, 22:32 kazeminarocloud would i get more replies if it were in latvian? ... Jan 13 2006, 22:27 redphoeinx
hun if u did it in latvian u would get more repl... Feb 13 2006, 00:13 kazeminarocloud hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replay... Feb 13 2006, 18:04 Rika
it would take a long time because i cant read lat... Feb 14 2006, 17:39 kazeminarocloud
That's ok!!!! You can write i... Feb 14 2006, 19:04 Tairanda Šī nots, šī aukstā nots.
Šī ledainā nots, aiz kura... Feb 14 2006, 18:14 kazeminarocloud XXXXXXXXX Feb 14 2006, 18:57 Tairanda you didn't understand. i thanslated my poem in... Feb 14 2006, 22:58 kazeminarocloud
oh...opps I thought it was mine because it was ab... Feb 15 2006, 17:11 Kikyou Hmm, it's somewhat okay. But I prefer poems wh... Feb 20 2006, 18:04 edg
Exactly! If you put only your best poems here... Feb 20 2006, 18:30 kahi whell, i red the poem, and i don't think that ... Feb 20 2006, 19:26 Angel, the deamon killer this is my poem
THE DARKNESS
I am stuck in plac... Mar 14 2006, 13:48 kazeminarocloud this is cool the things that i like most about poe... Mar 14 2006, 17:31 Lust To both : nice work Mar 15 2006, 21:17 kazeminarocloud
your just saying that noone else thinks that Mar 15 2006, 21:44 edg
your just saying that noone else thinks that
[sna... Mar 16 2006, 03:17 kazeminarocloud well............I guess your right because i write... Mar 16 2006, 19:02 kahi GEEZ, edg, aren't you tierd to write all this?... Mar 16 2006, 21:39 kazeminarocloud
thanks Mar 16 2006, 22:21 rebel edg - respect. the best thing in this topic was th... Apr 2 2006, 22:29 |
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