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kazeminarocloud
post Nov 11 2005, 22:18
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I am the unforgiven angel of the light holding pieces of
broken anger never knowing when or why im going to die
it's just why I have to fight.............Nothing will ever hold me back
may it be mortial or immortial.............Here I go.
The dark in nothing the only truly scary thing is my destiny.
Fallen light endless night For the fight im immortial!
Soring past the dark and Never loosing hope this one thing ......
Just one thing........!!!
I am the loving demon of the dark holding pices of dying Ember
and now my wings have broken but Im no hurt or scared
this is somthing that was thought about for a while now I know
theres no turning back!!
Because I am the wind controling mortal in this fight the stars
and the light are ever growing!!!

Humph you couldnt beat me even if I wasnt immortial...



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Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus
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kahi
post Mar 16 2006, 21:39
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GEEZ, edg, aren't you tierd to write all this???

kazeminarocloud, i'm waiting your next poem!!!!! dry.gif


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kazeminarocloud   Poem   Nov 11 2005, 22:18
AnGeL_LoVe   :o great poem... :)   Nov 11 2005, 22:26
redphoeinx   that is a great poem :D :blink:   Nov 21 2005, 22:42
Tigra2   Interesting. I realy think you shold continue, bec...   Nov 23 2005, 00:25
Natsuki   Beautifyll! I think, thats somethink so good...   Nov 23 2005, 01:05
kazeminarocloud   man did u people know that i couldnt find this po...   Jan 11 2006, 22:32
kazeminarocloud   would i get more replies if it were in latvian? ...   Jan 13 2006, 22:27
redphoeinx   hun if u did it in latvian u would get more repl...   Feb 13 2006, 00:13
kazeminarocloud   hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replay...   Feb 13 2006, 18:04
Rika   it would take a long time because i cant read lat...   Feb 14 2006, 17:39
kazeminarocloud   That's ok!!!! You can write i...   Feb 14 2006, 19:04
Tairanda   Šī nots, šī aukstā nots. Šī ledainā nots, aiz kura...   Feb 14 2006, 18:14
kazeminarocloud   XXXXXXXXX   Feb 14 2006, 18:57
Tairanda   you didn't understand. i thanslated my poem in...   Feb 14 2006, 22:58
kazeminarocloud   oh...opps I thought it was mine because it was ab...   Feb 15 2006, 17:11
Kikyou   Hmm, it's somewhat okay. But I prefer poems wh...   Feb 20 2006, 18:04
edg   Exactly! If you put only your best poems here...   Feb 20 2006, 18:30
kahi   whell, i red the poem, and i don't think that ...   Feb 20 2006, 19:26
kazeminarocloud   well people have a free will so they can read wha...   Feb 21 2006, 01:26
Angel, the deamon killer   this is my poem THE DARKNESS I am stuck in plac...   Mar 14 2006, 13:48
kazeminarocloud   this is cool the things that i like most about poe...   Mar 14 2006, 17:31
Lust   To both : nice work   Mar 15 2006, 21:17
kazeminarocloud   your just saying that noone else thinks that   Mar 15 2006, 21:44
edg   your just saying that noone else thinks that [sna...   Mar 16 2006, 03:17
kazeminarocloud   well............I guess your right because i write...   Mar 16 2006, 19:02
kahi   GEEZ, edg, aren't you tierd to write all this?...   Mar 16 2006, 21:39
kazeminarocloud   thanks   Mar 16 2006, 22:21
rebel   edg - respect. the best thing in this topic was th...   Apr 2 2006, 22:29


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