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| ShinChan |
 Mar 8 2004, 16:45
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 ultrafilozofs  Group: Chuunin Posts: 1808 Joined: 18-February 04 From: durdom  |
Man peeksnji marta ietekmee uznaaca veelme uzrakstiit sjo triisrindi:
Nokrīt saulesstars Asns spraucas no zemes Man ar laiks mosties ja kaadam ir veelme izpaust savas radosjaas potences (saveejaas es iipasji augstu neveerteeju) tad luugtum iepostojiet kaadu savu haiku, tanku, cetrrindi ar vai bez atskanjaam, ja gadiijumaa taa nav juusu tad vismaz noraadiet autoru vai avotu. Jau ieprieksj paldies par atsauciibu -------------------- Es esmu, kas es esmu
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| Fatalis |
Mar 8 2004, 17:47
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Kaka ir zem sniega
Neko darīt Jāgaida pavasaris |
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| mr_vodka |
Mar 8 2004, 20:40
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Hm, nekad neko neesmu nekur posteejis, nedz rakstiijis, nedz raadiijis. Rakstu pats prieksh sevis, lai peec tam lapinju vareetu sadedzinaat  -=Untitled=- Clock rings midnight Night changes day Sharp blade cuts And eases the pain Memories flicker Death in the air Life leaves the body Everything fades Graveyard bells plays Anthem of pain Another one ends His life on this plane Now he is gone And everyone moans Without even thinking What was his cause Mankind is retarded They've lost their mind A person is dead But they don't care why
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| Fatalis |
Mar 8 2004, 20:56
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Mīzaļi ir dzelteni
Kakas slēpjas zem sniega Pavasaris ir gaisā |
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| Batou |
Mar 8 2004, 21:13
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S9 unit Group: Jounin Posts: 587 Joined: 12-February 04 From: PS 9 |
 nezinu kaa citiem bet man patika fatalis haikas.pasha: seezhu jau tresho stundu njemos ap MU gribas eest. --------------------  |
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| Rune |
Mar 8 2004, 22:08
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 Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 261 Joined: 12-February 04 From: Kur pagadās. |
a cik rindinaam jaabuut?
Aaraa ir migla Eju piipeet Meeness ir spozhs -------------------- Elitärer Niedergangsdiagnostiker
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| Batou |
Mar 9 2004, 02:09
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S9 unit Group: Jounin Posts: 587 Joined: 12-February 04 From: PS 9 |
nee redzi haikai ir jaabuut taadai: pirmaas 2 rindijas apraksta kaut ko, savukaart peedeejaa ir conclusions vai noskanjas mainja. nu kaut kas taads - tjip opaaa!
piem: man ir kreesls balts, ar ritenjiem es noveelos. -------------------- |
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| Fatalis |
Mar 9 2004, 09:51
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Batou, tava pirmā neatbilst paša teiktajam.
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| kaarleens |
 Mar 9 2004, 10:47
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 Hentai Group: Jounin Posts: 1150 Joined: 13-February 04 From: Jelgava |
naz vai taa ir haika bet nu taada man ir situaacija
 Seezhu es darbaa Objekts deg Zhopa man ir galiigaa  -------------------- PERVERTS HELPING PERVERTS
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| ShinChan |
Mar 9 2004, 11:01
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ultrafilozofs Group: Chuunin Posts: 1808 Joined: 18-February 04 From: durdom |
Tavos darbos jausjams konkreets pavasara motiivs Gan jau viss tas ko sniegs pasjlaik sleepj no muusu aciim taps redzams peec paaris nedeeljaam  -------------------- Es esmu, kas es esmu
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| ShinChan |
Mar 9 2004, 11:06
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ultrafilozofs Group: Chuunin Posts: 1808 Joined: 18-February 04 From: durdom |
Principaa pareizi, tacju ir obligaati jaabuut apspeeleetam kaadam gadalaikam (vislabaak netiesjaa tekstaa), bez tam ir veelams ieveerot 17 zilbju principu 5;7;5, tacju mums kaa nedzejniekiem (vai varbuut tomeer ?) tas nav obligaati. Nav jau noteikti jaaposto tikai haiku, var iebliezt jebko kas ienaak prataa un pasjam liekas pienjemams. Fatalis tam ir pozitiivs piemeers  -------------------- Es esmu, kas es esmu
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| AlexMak |
Mar 9 2004, 12:40
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 Jinushi Group: Chuunin Posts: 75 Joined: 21-February 04 From: Ventspils |
Sezhu skola es
Gandriz stunda sakusies Smuka meicha blakus apsedusies! -------------------- Don`t hate the player, hate the game!
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| Batou |
Mar 9 2004, 14:59
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S9 unit Group: Jounin Posts: 587 Joined: 12-February 04 From: PS 9 |
labaak shitaa:
aizeju uz Pulkvedi, iedzeru alu, gribas Evitu. -------------------- |
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| mr_vodka |
Mar 9 2004, 18:58
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mmm... man liekas, ka shiet vairs nav vienkaarshi posteeshana un padaliishanaas, bet gan sacensiiba par to, kursh stulbaak var... nu tas protams mans, subjektiivais viedoklis
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| Smogs |
Mar 9 2004, 22:25
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 Jinushi Group: Chuunin Posts: 56 Joined: 14-February 04 From: Solar system |
NU labi varu jau es arī.. he..
Melns kaķis atstāj sniegotas pēdas uz asfalta. Kļūda varbūt vienīgi ir tā ka kaķis nav ziemas sezonas vārds, bet vienā haiku ir jābūt vienai sezonai... ...a man ir arī sniegs... -------------------- Newerthless meanings...
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