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| kazeminarocloud |
 Nov 11 2005, 22:18
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Check this out
I am the unforgiven angel of the light holding pieces of broken anger never knowing when or why im going to die it's just why I have to fight.............Nothing will ever hold me back may it be mortial or immortial.............Here I go. The dark in nothing the only truly scary thing is my destiny. Fallen light endless night For the fight im immortial! Soring past the dark and Never loosing hope this one thing ...... Just one thing........!!! I am the loving demon of the dark holding pices of dying Ember and now my wings have broken but Im no hurt or scared this is somthing that was thought about for a while now I know theres no turning back!! Because I am the wind controling mortal in this fight the stars and the light are ever growing!!! Humph you couldnt beat me even if I wasnt immortial... -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| AnGeL_LoVe |
Nov 11 2005, 22:26
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 Tennou Group: Chuunin Posts: 1548 Joined: 30-September 05 From: HeAvEn |
 great poem...  -------------------- De-ar fi sa-ti impartesti odata Tu bogatiile ce ai, Din toate darurile tale, Ti-as cere-o lacrima sa-mi dai. Mi-ai da atunci un strop de suflet, ce din adancuri imi rasare, Caci numai din adancul marii Se pescuiesc margaritare... |
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| redphoeinx |
 Nov 21 2005, 22:42
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 Heimin Group: Chuunin Posts: 24 Joined: 20-November 05 From: uk |
QUOTE(kazeminarocloud @ Nov 11 2005, 19:18) Check this out I am the unforgiven angel of the light holding pieces of broken anger never knowing when or why im going to die it's just why I have to fight.............Nothing will ever hold me back may it be mortial or immortial.............Here I go. The dark in nothing the only truly scary thing is my destiny. Fallen light endless night For the fight im immortial! Soring past the dark and Never loosing hope this one thing ...... Just one thing........!!! I am the loving demon of the dark holding pices of dying Ember and now my wings have broken but Im no hurt or scared this is somthing that was thought about for a while now I know theres no turning back!! Because I am the wind controling mortal in this fight the stars and the light are ever growing!!! Humph you couldnt beat me even if I wasnt immortial...  that is a great poem   -------------------- |
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| Tigra2 |
Nov 23 2005, 00:25
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 kawaii tora Group: Chuunin Posts: 2359 Joined: 19-August 05 |
Interesting. I realy think you shold continue, because work is somekind incompete. But mabey it is ment like that.
Sory for mistakes, if there is any. Anyway I am not good at spelling. -------------------- |
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| Kaede |
Nov 23 2005, 01:05
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 Koutaishi Group: Chuunin Posts: 1221 Joined: 25-October 04 From: maybe in your dreams |
Beautifyll! I think, thats somethink so good!
I cant descirbe my feelings! They are so strong after I red the poem... Ah!!!  -------------------- |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 11 2006, 22:32
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QUOTE(Angelic @ Nov 23 2005, 02:05) Beautifyll! I think, thats somethink so good! I cant descirbe my feelings! They are so strong after I red the poem... Ah!!! man did u people know that i couldnt find this poem on this site this must of been luck but thanks and ill try to finish it ur i mean try anyway -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Jan 13 2006, 22:27
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Samurai Group: Banned Posts: 134 Joined: 26-October 05 From: Sonoke castle |
would i get more replies if it were in latvian?
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Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| redphoeinx |
Feb 13 2006, 00:13
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Heimin Group: Chuunin Posts: 24 Joined: 20-November 05 From: uk |
QUOTE(kazeminarocloud @ Jan 13 2006, 19:27) would i get more replies if it were in latvian? hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replays why dont u try it  -------------------- |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 13 2006, 18:04
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hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replays why dont u try it [/quote] it would take a long time because i cant read lativan its a completle diffrent language then the one i currently speak -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| Rika |
Feb 14 2006, 17:39
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 Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 268 Joined: 6-November 05 From: I am un-locatable |
[quote=kazeminarocloud,Feb 13 2006, 17:04]
hun if u did it in latvian u would get more replays why dont u try it [/quote] it would take a long time because i cant read lativan its a completle diffrent language then the one i currently speak [/quote] That's ok!!!! You can write if you want,but I like the english way!))))) But whitch language do you speak?!?! -------------------- даже добро делал всем на зло
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| Mei |
Feb 14 2006, 18:14
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 Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 225 Joined: 27-August 05 From: The waiting room for miracles |
Šī nots, šī aukstā nots.
Šī ledainā nots, aiz kuras viss apledo. Šī debišķīgā, maigā nots. Visjaukākā, labākā un aukstākā. Vislīdzenākā, skaļākā piereizes klusākā. Tik labu noti grūti atrast mums. Un panākt, lai tā paliek pie mums. Šī nots, šī aukstā nots. Šī ledainā nots, aiz kuras viss apledo. Šī debišķīgā, maigā nots. Kas apslēpj sevi aiz siltā, maigā aukstuma. es pati sacerēju. i tried to translate but it did'n sound that goog anymore.  This post has been edited by Tairanda: Feb 14 2006, 18:18 --------------------     |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 14 2006, 18:57
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Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 14 2006, 19:04
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That's ok!!!! You can write if you want,but I like the english way!))))) But whitch language do you speak?!?! [/quote] english and im studing japanese oh and i know a bit of hebrew -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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| Mei |
Feb 14 2006, 22:58
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Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 225 Joined: 27-August 05 From: The waiting room for miracles |
you didn't understand. i thanslated my poem in english and it didn't sound that good. Not yours. i don't have english - latvian, i only have latvian - english dictionary.
P.S. i'm latvian -------------------- |
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| kazeminarocloud |
Feb 15 2006, 17:11
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Samurai Group: Banned Posts: 134 Joined: 26-October 05 From: Sonoke castle |
QUOTE(Tairanda @ Feb 14 2006, 23:58) you didn't understand. i thanslated my poem in english and it didn't sound that good. Not yours. i don't have english - latvian, i only have latvian - english dictionary. P.S. i'm latvian oh...opps I thought it was mine because it was about the same legnth thats why i put it up there sorry ill take it down immediatly ok -------------------- Dark Wind
Ode wa bishonen desu ne?................kaze-sama..Es esmu demonu karaļvalsts vējš, kurš sauc gaismas eņģeļus |
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