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| Namejs |
 Jan 18 2006, 01:07
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staasts saakaas kaadaa privaatmaajaa....maza meitene tumshiem matiem gulj gultaa un gaida kad atnaax winjas wecteevs un pastaastiis kaadu staastu kaa winsh meedz dariit wakaros. wecteews pienaak pie winjas gultas un waicaa:"wai tu esi dzirdeejusi staastu par debesu asaraam???"
meitene noliedzoshi pamaaj ar galvu un turpina klausiities... wecteews turpina:"daudzi cilveeki tic ka katrreiz kad liist kriit kaads engjelis kursh ir greekojis un zaudeejis sawus spaarnus tas kliist apkaart pa pasauli bez dweeseles, nozheelojot sawus nodarijumus....daudzus gadus atpakalj gaaza kaa no spainjiem weselu meenesi tieshi tajaa laikaa debesu walstiibaa notika karsh kuraa krita daudzi engjelji...(shameejie bij apseesti)...abas puses bija wienliidz stipras...gaismas engjelju (neapseestie) armiju wadiija ercenjgjelis Gabriels un tumsas engjelju armiju jaunc enjgjelis Adrians...izshkjiroshaa ciinja notika tieshi starp vinjiem, taa bija smaga ciinja kuraa tomeer uzwareeja Gabriels un Adrians ar sawiem ciinju biedriem bija nolemts dziiwot uz zemes kuraa valda bads, naids un karsh....Adrians un paareejie enjgjelji krita...kriitosho enjgjelju spaarni paarweertaas oglees un izputeeja. Adrians knapi pie samanjas buudams domaaja:"tad taads liktenis mani sagaida" un aizweeris acis cereeja ka driiz mirs, bet sanaaca sawaadaak...Adriana spaarni kljuwa melni........... Winsh attapaas sawaadaa pasaulee nezinaadams kas winsh ir un kur atrodas, winsh juta ka kaut kas winjam truuxt bet nespeeja atcereeties kas tieshi...Adrians paskatijaas spogulja lauskaa kas atradaas winjam blakus uz zemes un sajuta speerienu pa ribaam, un atkal zaudeeja samanju. kad winjsh attapaas winsh redzeeja 3 paplukushu cilweeku liikjus kuri bija izkropljoti un panikaa metaas beegt.....1.episode beigusies so....tas ir mans pirmais garadarbs tas ir domaats kaa storyboards mangai ko taisos ziimeet ...izskaidrojums kas notika kad winjsh 2. reizi zaudeeja samanju....Adrians izskatijaas kaa norm cilweeks kad tie 3 wiiri uzbruka winjam peec 1. sitiena no shameejaa muguras izauga melni spaarni un winja seja paarweertaas...acis kljuwa sarkanas un uz wija luupaam paraadijaas ljaunc siimnc...taalaakwar jau iedomaaties kas notika...Adriana uzmetums staaw manaa galerijaa...tjip tas dark angel -------------------- Dont tell what to do, and i wont tell you where to go :D
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| Tjen |
 Jan 18 2006, 15:10
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 Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 215 Joined: 10-September 05 From: Riga |
Ja kas man patik bet...man liekas ka tas nav mana stila tads garadarbs
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| Namejs |
Jan 18 2006, 17:13
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Samurai Group: Chuunin Posts: 113 Joined: 10-August 05 From: tou dont wanna know it....realy you dont |
buus labi turpinaajums tiek pashlaik sacereets
-------------------- Dont tell what to do, and i wont tell you where to go :D
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| Kaede |
Jan 18 2006, 17:21
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 Koutaishi Group: Chuunin Posts: 1221 Joined: 25-October 04 From: maybe in your dreams |
Noteikti turpini, ja ne citiem, tad kaut vai sev. Bet man nevisai, tomēr...
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| AmnE |
Jan 18 2006, 18:35
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Danshaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 157 Joined: 14-August 05 |
Man ljoti patika, bet vieniigais kas mani neapmierinaaja bija tas, ka viss bija taaakaa paarskreejiens tam, ko vareeja garaak un izsmeljoshaak uzrakstiit un nebuutu peec taa jaaraksta paskaidrojums, bet bija okey!
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| Kazuki |
Jan 18 2006, 20:17
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 Hakushaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 633 Joined: 15-September 05 |
notikumi risinaas nedaudz too fast, bet generally i like it. ir labs
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| Namejs |
Jan 18 2006, 21:29
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Samurai Group: Chuunin Posts: 113 Joined: 10-August 05 From: tou dont wanna know it....realy you dont |
tas wienkaarshi ir simple storyboard...scripts izskatiisies daudz sawaadaak
-------------------- Dont tell what to do, and i wont tell you where to go :D
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