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| Saiko |
 Oct 24 2004, 20:07
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 Danshaku  Group: Chuunin Posts: 238 Joined: 12-February 04 From: planet 34r7h  |
Haiku poem version of Windows
In Japan, Sony Vaio machines have replaced the impersonal and unhelpful Microsoft error messages with their own Japanese haiku poetry. Windows NT crashed. I am the Blue Screen of Death. No one hears your screams. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A file that big? It might be very useful. But now it is gone. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The Web site you seek Can not be located but Countless more exist - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Chaos reigns within. Reflect, repent, and reboot. Order shall return. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ABORTED effort: Close all that you have worked on. You ask way too much. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Yesterday it worked Today it is not working Windows is like that. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - First snow, then silence. This thousand dollar screen dies so beautifully. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - With searching comes loss and the presence of absence: "My Novel" not found. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The Tao that is seen Is not the true Tao, until You bring fresh toner. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Stay the patient course Of little worth is your ire The network is down - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A crash reduces your expensive computer to a simple stone. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Three things are certain: Death, taxes, and lost data. Guess which has occurred. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You step in the stream, but the water has moved on. This page is not here. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Out of memory. We wish to hold the whole sky, But we never will. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Having been erased, The document you're seeking Must now be retyped. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Serious error. All shortcuts have disappeared. Screen. Mind. Both are blank. -------------------- There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain.
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| Sindra |
Mar 27 2006, 23:33
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 Jinushi Group: Chuunin Posts: 40 Joined: 24-September 04 |
Vakardienas sniegs
Kas krita kā ķiršu ziedi Ir atkal ūdens -------------------- Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return.
To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's First Law of Equivalent Exchange. In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only, truth. http://amberkintribe.draugiem.lv  |
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| Batou |
Mar 31 2006, 05:02
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S9 unit Group: Jounin Posts: 587 Joined: 12-February 04 From: PS 9 |
nu ok.
vai tas ir normāli cilāt vecas tēmas ibitīt matos. nu ok Nr 2. prove me wrong. This post has been edited by Batou: Mar 31 2006, 07:22 --------------------  |
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| Tigra2 |
Mar 31 2006, 15:00
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 kawaii tora Group: Chuunin Posts: 2359 Joined: 19-August 05 |
vēlos pieiet tam
vēlos apskaut to ļoti vēlos čukstos teikt ak, tu mans mīļais mīlu tevi es ļoti mans kabacīti *manas patiesās jūtas pret kabačiem ^^* -------------------- |
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| kahi |
Mar 31 2006, 17:00
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 Hakushaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 756 Joined: 16-November 05 From: cradle of filth |
saule zem zemes
arī Tu un vakars mostas --------------------  esmu atpakaļ. spiciem nagiem un vārdiem. |
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| Tigra2 |
Mar 31 2006, 18:38
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kawaii tora Group: Chuunin Posts: 2359 Joined: 19-August 05 |
Kahi taa nav haika...
Haikaas ir svarīgs zilbju skaits katrā rindā, tavam brīvajam dzejolim ir 5-3-5, haikai jābūt 5-7-5, ja vien es kaut ko nejaucu sau-le-zem-ze-mes 5 a-rī-Tu(japāņiem a ir atsevišķa zilbe) 3 un-va-kars-mo-stas 5 -------------------- |
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| edg |
Mar 31 2006, 19:26
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 limpene grauž aknas Group: Jounin Posts: 2899 Joined: 17-February 04 From: PM |
Haikaa ir svariigs ne tikai zilbju skaits, bet arii citas lietas. Tajaa sakariibaa iesaku rakstiit normaalas haikas, citaadaak buus warn no manis. Jaa, warn fan fiction sadaljaa!
Sheit var postot visu to, par kuru "haikismu" ir shaubas: http://otaku.lv/index.php?showtopic=1198 Jaa, kaadreiz arii shajaa topikaa visu ko lika, bet tagad ir arii citi topiki, un katra pienaakums tagad ir spamot atbilstoshaakajaa. Un vaards "arii" zilbees dalaas "a-rii" arii latvieshu valodaa. P.S. Batou, ir normaali. -------------------- Mani posti top, jo tev dziivee truukst, ko lasiit! Es glaabju pasauli, piedaavaajot tai lasaamvielu! Kvalitaate, shvalitaate.
Disclaimer: Viss manis teiktais ir apshaubaams manis pasha no gaisa uzpuusts un uz punjkjiem balstiits viedoklis. |
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| Kikyou |
Apr 2 2006, 08:17
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 Kami-sama Group: Chuunin Posts: 3089 Joined: 1-April 04 |
QUOTE(Batou @ Mar 31 2006, 04:02) nu ok. vai tas ir normāli cilāt vecas tēmas ibitīt matos. nu ok Nr 2. prove me wrong.  Tas jau nav ēdiens Topiki nesapelē Man ir vienalga Prove me wrong. |
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| kahi |
Apr 2 2006, 18:54
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Hakushaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 756 Joined: 16-November 05 From: cradle of filth |
okiic..got the point...mēģinu vēlreiz
saule zem zemes un, ak, tas joprojām Tu un vakars mostas vai arī saule zem zemes un tas atkal tu ---''--- kurš pareizāx? help! tomēr gribas raxtīt haikas! -------------------- esmu atpakaļ. spiciem nagiem un vārdiem. |
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| ReD_FoXy |
Apr 2 2006, 19:03
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 onibaba Group: Chuunin Posts: 1027 Joined: 28-April 05 From: Riga, Latvia. |
QUOTE(kahi @ Apr 2 2006, 19:54) kurš pareizāx? help! tomēr gribas raxtīt haikas! peec Tigras teiktaa - pirmais. Bet labaak izklausaas otrais --------------------  |
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| edg |
Apr 2 2006, 21:35
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limpene grauž aknas Group: Jounin Posts: 2899 Joined: 17-February 04 From: PM |
Kikyou, tevis uzrakstiitais NAV haiku.
Var meegjinaat izgliitot sevi internetaa: http://www.google.lv/search?hl=lv&q=what+i...kl%C4%93t&meta= http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku Meegjinaashu pareizi atcereeties, kaa rakstiit labu haiku... Taa, pirmkaart, zilbes 5-7-5. Haiku apraksta kaadu skatu. Tas var buut vizuaals skats, dzirdeetais vai izjuutas, bet taa noteikti ir kaut kaada viizija nevis notikums. Haiku nesaka, kas notiek. Haiku staasta par noveerojumu. Labaa haiku pirmaas divas rindinjas apraksta viiziju un peedeejaa pasaka ko taadu, kas "sagriezh" haiku. Shkjiet, peedeejaa atljauts tomeer notikumu kaut kaadu izteikt. Ljoti labi ir to runaat alegorijaa - piemeeram, runaat par lapaam, bet domaat ar to cilveekus. Kaartiigaas japaanju haiku vienmeer ir runa par gadalaikiem, bet skaidrs, ka, taapeec, ka runaats ir alegorijaas, patiesiibaa nav aprunaats pavasaris kaa taads, bet kaada liidziiba ar to. Vairunamaa lietu var atrast liidziibu ar kaadu gadalaiku. Tas iisumaa viss. Ak, jaa, - haiku nekad neapraksta izjuutas! Taa apraksta viiziju. Ja ir auksti, tad ir auksti (taa ir viizija). Ja veejsh puush sejaa, tad veejs puush sejaa - taa arii ir viizija. Bet ieksheejsh nemiers, ne miilestiiba, ne kas taads nav viizija. Ak, jaa nemiers var buut gaisaa (un paareejie zveeri) - tad taa ir viizija. Haiku ir jaaskataas uz lietu no malas. Es droshi vien izprotu haiku "ar novirzeem", t.i., taa gluzhi, kaa es saku nav, taapeec nebanoshu katru, kas rakstiis ne preciizi taa, kaa teicu, bet, ja nebuus ne zilbes, ne apraksts, tad haiku ir garaam, un man nagi niez warn likt. Un par kahi sacereejumu. Man arii labaak patiik otrais, bet taa nav haiku. Tam vieta ir otaku dzejolju topikaa: http://otaku.lv/index.php?showtopic=1198 -------------------- Mani posti top, jo tev dziivee truukst, ko lasiit! Es glaabju pasauli, piedaavaajot tai lasaamvielu! Kvalitaate, shvalitaate.
Disclaimer: Viss manis teiktais ir apshaubaams manis pasha no gaisa uzpuusts un uz punjkjiem balstiits viedoklis. |
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| kahi |
Apr 3 2006, 17:12
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Hakushaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 756 Joined: 16-November 05 From: cradle of filth |
nu, vai zin, laikam gribas mest raxtīšanu pie malas, ja jau tik smaga kritika... tomēr atzīt par haiku rindojumu par suņusūdiem... no otras puses, gribas ielikt kaut ko pa savai gaumei, lai pārējiem acīs sprāgst, cik tas nepareizi!!
-------------------- esmu atpakaļ. spiciem nagiem un vārdiem. |
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| Tigra2 |
Apr 3 2006, 17:39
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kawaii tora Group: Chuunin Posts: 2359 Joined: 19-August 05 |
huh, mana it kā haika arī iarādās nemaz nav īsta haika(...pee man...)
Un btw. kahi. Ja tu vēlies un tev patīk, tad raksti, pasūti visus kritiķus uz poda un ja šie vēl muld norauj ūdeni  ! Bet lai to varētu labi izdarīt uzlabo savu skilu un tad pēc desmit gadiem, kad būsi kļuvusi/is par uberkruto haiku rakstnieku varēsi paskatīties ar samiegtām acīm uz kritiķi un teikt: ''Ak tad tu mani kritizēji?!! ... ...nu tad saņem!!!" un sašaudīt vinju ar revolveri(nu lab es drusk pārspīlēju) -------------------- |
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| Lija |
Apr 4 2006, 16:40
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 (yaoi) rota 69 Group: Chuunin Posts: 761 Joined: 22-March 04 From: look behind you... maybe i`m there? |
Varbuut daziem nepatiks ka krievu valodaa... citeesu kadu man dveeselei miilju dzejnieci - Daru aka Yumi -
"Uronjili Stasju napol, Otorvalji jei lapu, No vsjo ravno jejo ne brosju , po tamu sto ona Mira" ja godiiigi shaada teikuma un haikas konstrukcija ir viena no labaakaaam kaadu esu redzejusi.. *snif... snif...* |
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| +Chibi+ |
Apr 4 2006, 17:53
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 (yaoi) rota 69 Group: Kaigan Valde Posts: 2066 Joined: 10-September 04 From: sky |
*sniff* tik skaisti, ka mana ģimene velta man dzeju! vai hibrīdas haikas. XD
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