 Dzelojis + Story, by: Tomoko |
| Tomoko |
  Sep 15 2005, 18:12
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Mees bijaam laimiigi.
Mees smeejaamies, Mees smaidiijaam... Tad tas notika.. Tu biji satriekts. Tu vairs neredzeeji ko dari. Neviens tevi nesaprata. Neviens, iznjemot mani. Es centos no visiem speekiem tev palidzeet, Bet tu mani nedzirdeeji. Es gaidiiju briinumu, un tu arii.. Tas nepienaaca. Un tu veel joprojaam nesmaidiiji. Visus apmekleeja briinums, tevi nee. Tu juties neiezprasts. Taapat kaa es.. agraak.. Tu vairs nesmaidi. Vairs nekad.. Tu centies izdzivot starp shiim ledus sienaam, kas tevi ieskaava, spieda, pazemoja un tevi izniicinaaja Tu biji viens, tu centies aizsargaaties Tas nesanaaca, Tu sabruki.... Nju taa apmeeram...  |
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| Winry |
Sep 15 2005, 18:35
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Biagi labi...un tieshaam atgaadina animi......tik izteikti un izjusti.....nu zini veel kaadu, veel kaadu!!!!
  -------------------- "Describe your sorrows and desires, the thoughts that pass through your mind and your belief in some kind of beauty - describe all these with heartfelt, silent, humble sincerity and, when you express yourself, use the things around you, the images from your dreams and the objects that you remember." (Rainer Maria Rilke)
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Tomoko Dzelojis + Story Sep 15 2005, 18:12
Rudoru-san He, es laikam esmu pirmais šī darbiņa lasītājs... Sep 15 2005, 18:16 Sushi Baigi labi Tomoko!!! :D Man nez kaapee... Sep 15 2005, 18:21
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Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu... Sep 15 2005, 18:34 Sushi
Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu... Sep 15 2005, 18:40 Tomoko
Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu... Sep 15 2005, 18:46 Sushi Dereetu gan! ;) Tachu Crawling man ir miiljaak... Sep 15 2005, 18:49 Tomoko
Klausos, gjeneraal'! :D Jaanoformee tex... Sep 15 2005, 18:54 edg Truukst vaardu. Viss, ko es veelos teikt, izgaist ... Sep 15 2005, 19:12 Sushi Closed??? A? :huh: Sep 15 2005, 20:03 Tomoko Ok, topick un-locked ^^! Sep 16 2005, 16:41 pinksakura Ļoti labi uzrakstīts....man patīk... :lol: Sep 16 2005, 17:07 Tomoko Paldiess, paldiess! :) Sep 16 2005, 17:16 ShinChan Baigie primadonnas gājieni. Uzrakstam vienu dzejol... Sep 16 2005, 17:16 Tomoko Nu es atvainojos <_< , taa iznaaca *no comm... Sep 16 2005, 17:20 edg
Man, pirmo reizi lasot, arii likaas, ka taas ir p... Sep 16 2005, 23:07 Tomoko
Man, pirmo reizi lasot, arii likaas, ka taas ir p... Sep 17 2005, 10:48 ShinChan
...gluži kā vecs suns ar aizcietējumu putekļainā ... Sep 16 2005, 17:23 Tomoko
...gluži kā vecs suns ar aizcietējumu putekļainā ... Sep 16 2005, 17:45 Sushi Forshi, ka atkal atveeri! :) Labs turpinaajums... Sep 16 2005, 18:28 Tomoko
Nu, nekas iipashs nav mainiijies ^_^! Sep 16 2005, 19:19 CirvjaKaac Nu feini! Man patīk! Sep 16 2005, 19:18 Kaoru Nezinu, man ljoti patik *cepure nost* Sep 17 2005, 12:06 Rudoru-san Tad tomēr atvēri topicu, ko? :rolleyes:
Uzraxti ... Sep 17 2005, 13:04 Tomoko
Nju, jaagaida LIELAA iedvesma... un man liekas, ... Sep 17 2005, 15:36 Rudoru-san He he, labi... :rolleyes:
*turot īkšķus gaida To... Sep 17 2005, 16:03 Sakura ļoti forsi un interesanti!Tu esi veikusi savu ... Jan 7 2006, 19:05 silk Man patīk...esi i kārtīgi iedziļinājusies problēmā... Jan 7 2006, 20:45 Tomoko silk, paldies! :) tu esi viens/a no retajiem c... Jan 7 2006, 21:02 Tomoko Te kādreiz bija posts. Jan 8 2006, 00:17 |
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