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| Tomoko |
  Sep 15 2005, 18:12
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 Shishaku  Group: Chuunin Posts: 594 Joined: 27-April 05  |
Mees bijaam laimiigi.
Mees smeejaamies, Mees smaidiijaam... Tad tas notika.. Tu biji satriekts. Tu vairs neredzeeji ko dari. Neviens tevi nesaprata. Neviens, iznjemot mani. Es centos no visiem speekiem tev palidzeet, Bet tu mani nedzirdeeji. Es gaidiiju briinumu, un tu arii.. Tas nepienaaca. Un tu veel joprojaam nesmaidiiji. Visus apmekleeja briinums, tevi nee. Tu juties neiezprasts. Taapat kaa es.. agraak.. Tu vairs nesmaidi. Vairs nekad.. Tu centies izdzivot starp shiim ledus sienaam, kas tevi ieskaava, spieda, pazemoja un tevi izniicinaaja Tu biji viens, tu centies aizsargaaties Tas nesanaaca, Tu sabruki.... Nju taa apmeeram...  |
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| Rudoru-san |
Sep 15 2005, 18:16
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 Tidus Group: Chuunin Posts: 159 Joined: 1-July 05 |
He, es laikam esmu pirmais šī darbiņa lasītājs! Jāsaka, ka ļoti interesanti & saistoši! Uzreiz liek iedomāties par kādu Anime... Patiešām labi, liekas, ka Tu par kādu konkrētu personu raxti...
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| Sushi |
Sep 15 2005, 18:21
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 Tennou Group: Chuunin Posts: 1675 Joined: 11-July 05 From: Somewhere I belong? |
Baigi labi Tomoko!!!
 Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling...  Taa tik tureet! -------------------- |
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| Tomoko |
Sep 15 2005, 18:34
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Shishaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 594 Joined: 27-April 05 |
QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:21) Baigi labi Tomoko!!! Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling... Taa tik tureet!  Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu, ka ledus sienas bija dziesmaa Crawling!  Un, ja ta godiigi, tas ir mans maajasdarbs literatuuraa, uzraxtiit un noformeet dzejoli, un kautkaa gribeejaas kautko origjinaalu un savu ! |
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| Winry |
Sep 15 2005, 18:35
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 Shishaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 434 Joined: 1-June 05 |
Biagi labi...un tieshaam atgaadina animi......tik izteikti un izjusti.....nu zini veel kaadu, veel kaadu!!!!
-------------------- "Describe your sorrows and desires, the thoughts that pass through your mind and your belief in some kind of beauty - describe all these with heartfelt, silent, humble sincerity and, when you express yourself, use the things around you, the images from your dreams and the objects that you remember." (Rainer Maria Rilke)
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| Sushi |
Sep 15 2005, 18:40
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Tennou Group: Chuunin Posts: 1675 Joined: 11-July 05 From: Somewhere I belong? |
QUOTE(Tomoko @ Sep 15 2005, 19:34) QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:21) Baigi labi Tomoko!!! Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling... Taa tik tureet! Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu, ka ledus sienas bija dziesmaa Crawling! Un, ja ta godiigi, tas ir mans maajasdarbs literatuuraa, uzraxtiit un noformeet dzejoli, un kautkaa gribeejaas kautko origjinaalu un savu !Nu ja! Tikai tur bija iisteniibaa kristaala sienas. Vismaz taa es lasiiju k-kur internetaa! -------------------- |
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| Tomoko |
Sep 15 2005, 18:46
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Shishaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 594 Joined: 27-April 05 |
QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:40) QUOTE(Tomoko @ Sep 15 2005, 19:34) QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:21) Baigi labi Tomoko!!! Man nez kaapeec atgaadina Linkin Park dziesmu Crawling... Taa tik tureet! Tu zini, Tev taisniiba, jo tikai tagad apjeedzu, ka ledus sienas bija dziesmaa Crawling! Un, ja ta godiigi, tas ir mans maajasdarbs literatuuraa, uzraxtiit un noformeet dzejoli, un kautkaa gribeejaas kautko origjinaalu un savu !Nu ja! Tikai tur bija iisteniibaa kristaala sienas. Vismaz taa es lasiiju k-kur internetaa! Kristaala? Vai, sorry, bet es nezinaaju... Bet tad vismaz ir atshkjiriba starp klipu un manu dzejoli  ! Man shodien iedvesma  ! Veel buus kautkas jaaparaksta }=) ! |
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| Sushi |
Sep 15 2005, 18:49
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Tennou Group: Chuunin Posts: 1675 Joined: 11-July 05 From: Somewhere I belong? |
Dereetu gan!
 Tachu Crawling man ir miiljaakaa Linkin Park dziesma, kaut arii veca... Bet turpini raxtiit! -------------------- |
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| Tomoko |
Sep 15 2005, 18:54
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Shishaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 594 Joined: 27-April 05 |
QUOTE(Missy @ Sep 15 2005, 18:49) Dereetu gan! Tachu Crawling man ir miiljaakaa Linkin Park dziesma, kaut arii veca... Bet turpini raxtiit! Klausos, gjeneraal'! Jaanoformee texc, un tad jau varees kjerties pie raxtiishanas ! (ja sanaaks laikas) |
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| edg |
Sep 15 2005, 19:12
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 limpene grauž aknas Group: Jounin Posts: 2899 Joined: 17-February 04 From: PM |
Truukst vaardu. Viss, ko es veelos teikt, izgaist pusceljaa. Taapeec es tikai klanos. Visu cienju.
-------------------- Mani posti top, jo tev dziivee truukst, ko lasiit! Es glaabju pasauli, piedaavaajot tai lasaamvielu! Kvalitaate, shvalitaate.
Disclaimer: Viss manis teiktais ir apshaubaams manis pasha no gaisa uzpuusts un uz punjkjiem balstiits viedoklis. |
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| Sushi |
Sep 15 2005, 20:03
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Tennou Group: Chuunin Posts: 1675 Joined: 11-July 05 From: Somewhere I belong? |
Closed??? A?
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| Tomoko |
Sep 16 2005, 16:41
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Shishaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 594 Joined: 27-April 05 |
Ok, topick un-locked ^^!
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| pinksakura |
Sep 16 2005, 17:07
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 Hentai-chan Group: Chuunin Posts: 604 Joined: 23-July 05 From: :D |
Ļoti labi uzrakstīts....man patīk...
-------------------- Agent Smith: We're willing to wipe the slate clean, give you a fresh start. All that we're asking in return is your cooperation in bringing a known terrorist to justice.
Neo: Yeah. Well, that sounds like a pretty good deal. But I think I may have a better one. How about, I give you the finger [He does.] Neo: ...and you give me my phone call. |
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| Tomoko |
Sep 16 2005, 17:16
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Shishaku Group: Chuunin Posts: 594 Joined: 27-April 05 |
Paldiess, paldiess!
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| ShinChan |
Sep 16 2005, 17:16
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 ultrafilozofs Group: Chuunin Posts: 1808 Joined: 18-February 04 From: durdom |
Baigie primadonnas gājieni. Uzrakstam vienu dzejoli, sagaidam piecas atsauksmes. Bez paskaidrojumiem slēdzam topiku. Bez paskaidrojumiem atkal to atveram. WTF?
Bet dzejolis tik tiešām vairāk atgādina dziesmas liriku. Starp citu, kas tam čomam vainas? Bija ar vēzi vai alkoholismu sirgstošs? -------------------- Es esmu, kas es esmu
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